Today I didn’t have anything special to write about, so my mom told me to write a story retell. This is what I wrote:
Rory was one of Arden United’s players. On Tuesday, the Arden players were training for the match against the team, Springfield. Rory went in the tackle and Mr. Mint blew his whistle. Mr. Mint told Rory that the tackle was very nasty. Rory spent the rest of the match on the sideline. The next two weeks, he got into trouble again. The following week, he kicked the players. Mr. Mint gave out a red card to Rory. He told Rory he was the best players on the team. If he doesn’t behave on the field on Saturday, he would be off the team for good.
On Saturday, Rory’s mom went to the farmer’s market with Rory. Rory had saved $20, so he looked for something to buy. He saw a Arden United quilt. He asked for the price of the quilt was. He said it was $20. So he bought it. Rory was feeling pleased until he met his mom. His mom said to take it back because he had lots of Arden United things already. So they went to put the quilt but the stall wasn’t there. It had vanished. So they went home.
He put the quilt on the bed and jumped on the field. Suddenly, he landed hard on the grass. He found he jumped 100 years into the future. Then, he saw a green boy of his age called Skrekie. The boy had four arms and legs. He helped the boy’s team to fight against the Mars North School team. Their team members came all over the galaxy. It was a hard match. Finally, Arden United Earthlings won 5-1. They felt excited. They gave a big leap of joy. The jump brought them back. Just now, Rory got hurt from the game. He couldn’t play the match against Springfield. So, Skrekie needed a disguise to replace Rory. Rory put some face powder to make Skrekie’s face less green. Skrekie put two arms under his shirt and hide two legs into his pants. Arden United won this match too. But none discover Skrekie disguise as Rory. Rory’s mom washed Rory’s quilt. It came out colorless. Rory couldn’t go back the future again.
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I like the story very much.
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