Saturday, March 3, 2012

Trip to Ottawa Part 2

...we left. Then we headed out to McDonalds. We ate buttery pancakes and hash browns. I ordered a hot chocolate. My mom ordered the same thing except the hash browns. When we were walking back to the hotel, we found a fun park. We found a ice slide. So we had to were our snowpants. When we went back to the hotel,we wore our snowpants to go. We went to the park and checked the ice sculptures first. We went through a maze and then, we went to a weird soldiers thing. I had to do push ups and stuff. It was hard. I got a toy soldier for the effort. We then slid off the ice hills a lot of times. It was fun. I did it again and a again. Then we went to a dino see saw. This time the see saw was way better than normal ones. It was extra long, extra bouncy and a lot of fun. The special thing about this thing was it could seet a lot of kids. Our parents would push us up and down. Then mom and dad bought food for me because i was hungry. So we ordered a hot dog and fries. Meanwhile we heard a speaker say "the show begins in 10 minutes. So we ate while we watched. They were doing ballet. It was okay. We watched until we were bored. The music was really loud and it was causing a lot of attention. So I asked a man where to get ballons. He said we ran out but they had a tossing game. I got 1 out of 3. That stinked. I should have got all in. After we left, and wen to eat. We went back to the hotel. then we went to check out the swimming pool. We tried but it was too late. We went to a Tai restuarant called Pepper... something. Then we went back to the hotel and went to bed.

3 comments:

  1. Remember the essay class - to inform, instruct or entertain. What do you want to do? It is a little entertaining, but can have the readers feeling more fun if you can highlight some interesting events, such as the soldier thing.

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  2. No it's no to inform, instruct or entertain. You got it mixed up. It's persuade, etertain, and inform.

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  3. Now I remembered.....! The restuarant was called Papaya.

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