Story Retell…The Vanishin’g Monster

There was a boy who was called Davy, who lived in Puddle Lane. He had a sister named Sarah. There was a big old house at the end of the lane. It had a garden. Any body could go in there to play. One day, Davy went into the garden. Davy sat down under an old tree. After a long time, he heard a noise. He looked up and saw 2 long green ears. He was very still and quiet. He saw 2 green eyes. Soon, he saw a long green tail. Davy was a bit afraid. All the parts of the monster joined up and he went out of the bushes! At that moment, he sneezed. In a moment, the monster vanished. Davy waited and he saw 2 green ears. Later, he saw 2 eyes. Next, he saw there was a long green tail. Then, all the parts of the monster joined up together. The monster was back! He looked very nervous. Davy told the monster not to be afraid of him and he wouldn’t hurt him. The monster told Davy in a whilly-griffly voice that he would not be afraid of him and hurt him too. They made friends. The Griffle (monster) stayed and played with Davy. Davy took the griffle back home. He told Sarah about the Griffle but she didn’t see him anywhere. Sarah did not believe it.