I’m at the beach and the test

Today, my teacher told me to write a descriptive paragraph. This is what I wrote. One day, I went to the beach. I was making a sandcastle. There was a lot of people on the beach. There were lots of seagulls on the beach. People were eating pizza and drinking Pepsi. Someone was sleeping under the sun. People were swimming. I dove into the water. I swam until I was tired. I ate a hamburger and drank Nestea. These foods were delicious. Somebody brought me a seashell. I heard the sound of the sea. I felt water rushing smoothly at my feet. I smelled the salty water. I felt the seashell bumpy. Then, I heard people singing peaceful songs.

In the evening, I went to Chinese School. We had a Chinese test. I got 100 over 100. My work was all correct. My work was all correct because my mom helped me to review my work for several days. I worked very hard. My parents were proud of me. I was proud of myself. I was very happy.